[ When will Jaskier learn that his outbursts are far more motivation to tease him than to stop? He's getting so worked up over it with such obviously overblown annoyance, Ciri can just imagine his expression without even looking at him most of the time. The way he places extra emphasis on his words and punctuates his complaints with a snapped-off bite, the bard's as prickly as the cactus he made a certain vampire. ]

I know what a metaphor is. And I do like that bit about the phoenix. Maybe put that in the title?

[ She seems to be ignoring the fact he's throwing a tantrum behind her, though. This part is fussy. She doesn't want the milk to boil. ]

Something about the sword that rose from the ashes... or some such. A title should be easy to remember. To get people shouting for it when you perform. Isn't that right?